Go through my profile, and go to the last song which is burn down..lemme know what ya'll think

I haven't had a chance to peep it yet, but I will here in the next 24 hours! I'll update this thread when I do.

Ok, You know we keep it real on this site...and every word we pass along is just encouragement for improvement. That being said, I will say that this song sounds like it has a lot of potential. However, I don't think the lyrics did the beat any justice. In fact the singing wasn't what it COULD HAVE been. I think you did pretty good work on the rapping part, however the singing is not matching up with this track.

What would I do? I would re-write the entire singing lead and chorus. It's just not doing this track justice. I can see where your trying to go with this track and I agree with the direction your taking, you just need to put more effort into singing the notes in the same key as the instrumental and writing with a more commercial style approach. Make the first 30 seconds of this song BIG and keep building up from there. This is what the A&R's look for. They want energy and they want to be able to 'Bob' their heads. Hope this helps man and GOOD LUCK!

BoneCEO
www.flench.com

For sure man..i appreciate them words...i'll keep you posted on how the track is going...i needed some opinion from sum1 who knew bout music..we'll keep in touch...